Final Rating: 4.25. Finished 48 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: John Ray

Description: Sometimes dreams don't come true

Experience: New to animation

Time taken: 3 days


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Sujit K:


Sabrina Winkel:

Decent! It's very well put together but the hand gestures to the character behind the computer don't go well

Shakya Achyut:

Try to implement some of the movement in shoulder and countering that with hips... It will look much better

Byron Pockrandt:

The first character's overall motions need some work. Good poses, but the breakdowns almost float from pose to pose. Her back seems to be frozen and very limited. You can fix that by adding some shoulder animation. It will help make it feel more natural. I do like the hair animation. You should also have her blink while the second character is talking. The finger animation on the second character is good. I think the hand could be a bit more exaggerated though to really give off the sarcastic feel. Good environment too.