Comments:
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Sujit K:
floats
Sabrina Winkel:
Decent! It's very well put together but the hand gestures to the character behind the computer don't go well
Shakya Achyut:
Try to implement some of the movement in shoulder and countering that with hips... It will look much better
Byron Pockrandt:
The first character's overall motions need some work. Good poses, but the breakdowns almost float from pose to pose. Her back seems to be frozen and very limited. You can fix that by adding some shoulder animation. It will help make it feel more natural. I do like the hair animation. You should also have her blink while the second character is talking. The finger animation on the second character is good. I think the hand could be a bit more exaggerated though to really give off the sarcastic feel. Good environment too.
Animator: John Ray
Description: Sometimes dreams don't come true
Experience: New to animation
Time taken: 3 days