Final Rating: 2.88. Finished 84 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Leah Green

Description: My 2D animation, which depicts two spy girls talking about spy life troubles in a night club bathroom.

Software used: TVPaint

Experience: 2-3 weeks

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein:

I like the character design of the first speaker. Maybe add a little more fluid movement.

Sabrina Winkel:

She moves her arms to much

Hanne Dewachter:

Try to remember that movements aren't just restricted to the limbs themselves, all movement goes through shoulders, back, hips,.. your character look quite stiff because their movement is so localised.

Byron Pockrandt:

The second character's mouth should move and be synced like the first character. There should also be more breakdowns between the poses and arm movements.