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The not amazing spy


Final Rating: 4.78. Finished 39 out of 96 entries.

389 views including the voting period.



Description: One spy partner contemplates her life choices before doing spy work

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: about 1 1/2 week


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Sabrina Winkel:

I loved the emotion

Richard Carrillo Barrios:

"I thought I would be this amazing spy" (while doing SPY stuff)

Shakya Achyut:

nice work!! loved the idea...and overall decent animation. When left girl is talking right girl freezes in space.hmmm

William Harrison:

I feel like when she says, "well for what its worth" you shouldn't keep her held in place. I also think you should tone down the jumpiness of the animation for example when she says, "everything" the shoulder raise seems too fast and it takes away from the naturality of the shot. Or when she says, "this amazing spy". It also shows in the second character on the left. On both the "everything", and "this amazing spy" the spy on the left does jumpy actions. You should add some anticipation as those movements seem to be out of the blue, and maybe add some more ease in and out. You have some nice stuff going, but really polishing it and looking over those problems could make the shot even better.

Byron Pockrandt:

Very good timing between poses and breakdowns. I think the first character with the hair bun could use some more tweaking with the facial expressions. I think she should turn to her partner sooner before she starts talking to her. Other than that, good work!