Comments:
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Luke Coleman:
I don't know if there is missing detail here due to the resolution quality, but from what I can see there is a lot of improvements that can be made for this.
- Appears to be still in the blocking out stage, make sure to spend a little time refining the curves.
- Lack of eye movement (blinking & moving)
- Character 1 fingers are glued together for the whole animation.
-Character 1 has good facial expressions at start, after she turns it then becomes a static pose however.
- Character 2 has good animation, however her mouth movements are a little too exaggerated for certain words.
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Shakya Achyut:
Personally i think this rig is only good for gesture animation. missing lotta basic principles of animation. Very stiff characters, and animation is very linear. No anticipation no arc..Dont give up, u can do it
Sabrina Winkel:
Huge arms huge hands. Lip sync is bad
Byron Pockrandt:
The first character needs to move even after she is done speaking. She needs to move more naturally as well. She feels more like a robot right now. The lip sync also needs some work.
John Sloan:
Pancake hands are incredibly distracting.
Animator: Anthony Franklin
Description: In which a former teacher is encouraged that she makes a good spy
Experience: 6 months
Time taken: 2 weeks