Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein:

Good eye contact between the characters.

Harsh Bisht:

Good work but animation is missing...no life in characters...Apart from that lighting and rendering is good.

Shakya Achyut:

good work

Elizabeth Dik:

Great work!

Byron Pockrandt:

The hand and eye animations are on point. Great job there. However the overall body motion doesn't seem to be as crisp. The moving holds and breakdowns of the body move too slowly.

John Sloan:

The camera angle is a little weird. It just feels like youre trying to shove too much into the scene. Also the red head girls animation is a bit robotic