Final Rating: 5.06. Finished 30 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Carlo Torres

Description: So they are doing a mission as an undercover agent , but their role is just to be a boring look out in a bowling alley. So the second girl is with a costume like a bowling ball .

Experience: 1 year of school

Time taken: 14 days


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Shakya Achyut:

wow animation is really good!! does audio seem off? or is it just on mine? try different codec

William Harrison:

You have some nice things in this but the floaty animation takes away from it. If you fixed the timing and spacing it would look much better. At some points it looks like it was slow mo. Some moving holds could also help with it. When the character says, "same boring person I was before" you seem to have an even spacing on the head and fingers. Which if you had a moving hold till she says, "I was before" and make that motion faster and then add ease in and ease out it would make it much more flowy (if thats even a word). Keep up the work though! If you can sort those out, it could be a pretty cool shot!

Hanne Dewachter:

.. Your lipsync is a little all over the place, huh. Try not to overdo it with the mouth movements, at times they look like they're enthousiastically chewing bubblegum. In general not every letter of a lipsync needs to be animated.
I like your movements and interpretation though!

Rachid Jatib:

I like the idea, but the lip sync is a lil bit off.


I think the timing is a bit off? Maybe the frame rate needs to be adjusted in post?

Ahmed Salama Elmostshar:

nice animation but the sound does not match the movement of the mouth

Byron Pockrandt:

I love the hair animation. However I think your key poses were off a little on timing, as in they were a little late. The timing seems to just be a little off and late, but other than that, good work.