Shakya Achyut:

wonderful work

Elizabeth:

I would change the camera angle overall good job

Ahmed Salama Elmostshar:

I really do not understand... what is this

Byron Pockrandt:

Her actions move a little too quickly. Slow them down a bit. Timing needs adjusted.

John Sloan:

Fun camera angle. Some of the movements seem to jump around to quickly. Fun character faces. Needs more work.