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Small Dress and a Big Gun

by Joe Cooper

Final Rating: 2.84. Finished 85 out of 96 entries.

393 views including the voting period.


Animator: Joe Cooper

Description: A women undercover as a waitress grabs her gun to do a hit while lamenting her lack of action in the field.

Experience: 4 Years

Time taken: 12 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Bridget McCleary:

Too much camera movement

Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein:

I really like this design and concept. A lttle jerky; what's happening around frame 194 is a little confusing.

Frank Pak:

I think you use too many camera movements

Byron Pockrandt:

You have some confusing camera angles. Keep the camera relatively still and the shot changes down to a minimum. Also the main character with the big head moves around very sporadically at 184 and 270. Tone down the movements and try to keep it more subtle.