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Interesting concept. Just needs to read better. Stronger posing for the girl. And then some anticipation for the screen. It was really hard to read. Camera angles were good but maybe try to have them moving.
Good Concept .....Fine Animation
Props for creativity. Though your general expression and movement could use some work. It might be nice to see the black hair person's face when he says, "Yeah I took it!" that sentance has expression which would be nice to see.
Animator: NeSung A. Lawrence
Description: The little child has come to talk to his elder sister who is in a coma. They communicate through the machine.
Experience: 2 years and still learning
Time taken: 20 days