Final Rating: 4.59. Finished 64 out of 128 entries.

385 views including the voting period.


Animator: NeSung A. Lawrence

Description: The little child has come to talk to his elder sister who is in a coma. They communicate through the machine.

Experience: 2 years and still learning

Time taken: 20 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Samuel Bourland:

Interesting concept. Just needs to read better. Stronger posing for the girl. And then some anticipation for the screen. It was really hard to read. Camera angles were good but maybe try to have them moving.

kiranjot kaur:

Nice concept

Gaurav Rawat:

Good Concept .....Fine Animation

Lucas Donaldson:

Props for creativity. Though your general expression and movement could use some work. It might be nice to see the black hair person's face when he says, "Yeah I took it!" that sentance has expression which would be nice to see.