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The art style seems nice here. However, the animation still looks very stiff and unnatural. If you look closely to the way human move, we cannot move one part of our body without the other part moving (eg. muscle). for example, when the character is speaking, the jaw will move or when you are flexing/moving your hand, the arm and wrist move too.
Good effort! I think there should be more body gestures, more accentuated movements. the part there the second kid asks "did you take it?" has too much of a build up?
eye focus is alittle off, can't tell if they are next to each other or on bunkbeds. overall really good
Description: It's midnight, and two kids share their secrets during a sleep-over.
Experience: 2 years of school
Time taken: Two weeks working sporadically in the afternoon