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by Maya Lukmana
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Very cool, love the clean lines and character design.
nice! love the transition!
Good movement, but it does not need to move EXACTLY with the words, otherwise it feels too robotic.
9 stars here
this is of clear action choices and characters that the auidence can see clearly even from a distance.
The limited moves make sense and are approipirate for me .
Learn from this everyone...for simple outline char's are sometimes the best.
Direction of the cuts is spot on
Hope to see more from u in the future, and thanks a bunch for submitting this...great job overall!!!!
Animator: Maya Lukmana
Description: After being asked by a co-worker, a new employee starts to question his life choices.
Experience: about two years (as a student)
Time taken: roughly a week (with watery eyes and a sore thumb)