Comments:
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Jennie:
I don't know if we needed the 4th wall break. (frame 435)
Israel Silva:
Breaking the fourth wall is always fun! Keep up the good work.
Megan Whisenhunt:
The walk cycle is fine but goes on for a little too long. I like the character movements and interaction but both of their upper bodies are too stiff
Richard Adams:
Some nice acting choices. I'd cut out the first 216 frames as it doesn't really add anything. Also, frame 442, when people say "me" they normally point to their chests, not their eyes, and the staring at the camera also doesn't really work. Movements a bit stiff here and there.
I do like how the black man reacts at frame 294, and his covering his face with his hand in exasperation towards the end, nicely done.
Kelly Haryanto:
nice job! love the exaggeration
Adriano Viana:
really enjoyed!
Alice Cwik:
Nice acting, but the characters seem weightless and there's little "flippyness", as in the movement seems monotonus in places.
Animator: Nick Manning
Description: Detective Sam interrogates his colleague David with a twist ending
Experience: 5 years as a novice animator
Time taken: Animated throughout the month. Most likely 30 hours