David Poole:

It's a great animation, however, when he says be curious, the character is a little too forceful and angry. Maybe just lighting it up a bit might be good.

Pevin Kinel:

The cane spin is good but could be brilliant with a little anticipation. Nice try showing him put weight on it afterwards during the walk but I feel it's not quite there yet. Maybe use the hips?

Alex Mey:

Lots of character added and acting reference was clearly implemented very well. Lots of subtle detail packed into great gesture choices. The staging of elements is simple and very effective. I love the little wink after the twirl. Nice job.

Ashar Khan:

nice idea

Eva Margaretha:

very nice staging! lipsync needs to be pushed a little bit more, otherwise great!

Vee :

Body movements are good, but it’s difficult to see the lip sync from the angle you chose.