Dante:

Animation is good, you're putting a lot more work into the cameras than necessary though. Zooming in and out on the mom is a bit too much movement for this kind of scene.

Maria:

Such nice moments from the little girl, the covering of the mouth and change of expression.

Rishikesh Jaiswal:

The staging is good and the camera movement is okay. But there is a jitter in the animation that takes the believability out of the characters' emotions.