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by Wei Wan
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Interesting how the stylized heads turned into cubes. Guess you ran out of time hunh? The volumetric feel is beautiful, and gorgeously animated. Top 5 entry, possible winner? Maybe?
Vlad M. A.:
Construction is an essential tool in animation, and it's very good to see you're using it! However, you should look at your characters and try to break them down into sensible forms that actually describe their features. Here, your characters have oval heads with a protruding jaw/cheek area. That isn't at all suggested by an incommodious, bulky cube. Not to mention how hard it would be to determine things like ear placement accurately. There also doesn't seem to be much of a construction on the torsos, which often seem to only be described by 2 lines on each side, so it would really help you if you worked on that too. Also, connecting the body to the head with a neck is always a good idea, draw it in even when it would be obstructed by the lower jaw/head, it'll help you more easily determine how to orient the head and where to place it exactly. Overall nice work though, especially on the timing.
This is so cute, not finished, but really adorable characters!
Cute!! and the animation is pretty good !
Animator: Wei Wan
Description: Two friends chatting and complaining.
Experience: about 3 years
Time taken: about 1 week(Sorry there was not enough time to complete it)