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You Don't Know French

by Mitch_D

Final Rating: 5.25. Finished 44 out of 117 entries.

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Animator: Mitch_D

Description: I actually did know French at one point!

Experience: less than 2 years

Time taken: About a week on and off

Comments:

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Amelie Olima:

The acting and staging is great! Try to experiment more with overlapping and secondary actions. Avoid twinning too. Nice work.

Jennifer Croom:

I love this- the walking at the beginning has a bit too much hip movement imo but I love her expression at the end! Very good stuff

David Nori:

The second character has a really interesting face in the beginning and it looked promising, but then she went of model. Try to keep the same 'bone structure' in the face.