Comments:
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Amelie Olima:
The acting and staging is great! Try to experiment more with overlapping and secondary actions. Avoid twinning too. Nice work.
Jennifer Croom:
I love this- the walking at the beginning has a bit too much hip movement imo but I love her expression at the end! Very good stuff
David Nori:
The second character has a really interesting face in the beginning and it looked promising, but then she went of model. Try to keep the same 'bone structure' in the face.
Animator: Mitch_D
Description: I actually did know French at one point!
Experience: less than 2 years
Time taken: About a week on and off