Louis M.F.:

Yoooo this rocks! The character acting is for sure on par with professional advertising. Lip synch is a little floaty on "I'm" and "already", just needs pursed lips for the "M" and little jaw bounce between "Rea-" and "-dy". That aside, body movements are on point, posing is solid, your attention to weight and balance is A+ and the subtle followthrough/anticipation gives her a lot of life.

David Nori:

A little bit glidey in the last hand move, and feels a bit unmotivated. Maybe try to do it without hand movements and find a different way to show her excitement. Great!