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The visa office shenanigan

by Saif

Final Rating: 5.34. Finished 41 out of 117 entries.

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Animator: Saif

Description: The tourist faces a stern visa officer and tries to appease her with a little puppet show.

Experience: Animating for a year

Time taken: 4 days

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Louis M.F.:

Hehe, this is a fun style. Animation is pretty simple but it's a nifty little character study, would love to see these dudes moving around a bit more. Don't be afraid to go a little crazier with the lip-synch, really exaggerate those mouth movements. Decent stuff

Amelie Olima:

I really like the puppet gag! The character designs are great as well! Try working with animating the hair - or perhaps some extra acting with the older woman - maybe her adjusting her glasses? Really nice work here.

David Nori:

First character seems too familiar with the situation. I mean would someone working at the airport have encountered this kind of situation before?