Comments:
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Louis M.F.:
Movements are a bit stiff when they enter their beginning/end poses, but they're looking super fluid while they're moving, and your gestures have a lot of character. Love the pointing pose when she says "Problem". Experiment with follow-through and try having the characters "relax" into a pose when they reach it instead of standing stock still, that should loosen up the movement a bit. Your lip-sync is awesome though, no problems there. I see a lot of potential
Richard Adams:
Waitress is overly floaty. See Youtube about dealing with floatiness in your animations.
David Nori:
The movement dies at almost every time they get to their final pose.
Animator: hui
Description: First time entering a competiton!
Experience: Student
Time taken: 5-6 days