Comments:
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André:
It's hard to understand the idea. Is this sarcasm or talking about your personal experiences during a fight? The animation is interesting.
In my opinion, in frame 142, there should be a clear threat that the heroine would not be able to fend off, because in the beginning I already saw how she easily knocked out the first enemy with one slap, so I can assume that she could just as easily knock out the second one.
Joshua:
The Running cycle, and the roll after getting slapped at the beginning was good, but everything else feels choppy, or unfinished at one point or another.
As for the animation as a whole, I'm not sure if you were just using this as a way to practice different actions of animation. There's nothing wrong with that, many people in this competition do this at one point or another. But as for the whole 'scene' I wasn't following what was going on at all, it felt like I was watching one movie, but listening to another.
Sourjya Mitra:
why the slap tho
Madg:
One of the best
David:
I feel like it's better starting with the camera on the lady so it's clear who is talking.
Josh:
Hahaha
Animator: Rabah Cheurfa
Description: Lost in thoughts about love, Jane crushes her enemies without caring. With Mr. Cat by her side, even existential crises can’t stop her from winning every fight.
Experience: Junior
Time taken: 2 weeks