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A Dark World Of Mind Control

by Sadonna

Final Rating: 6.40. Finished 18 out of 108 entries.

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Animator: Sadonna

Description: In a chilling world where people can manipulate others' emotions and thought at will, these two lines of dialogue are somewhat scary, aren't they?

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: two week

Comments:

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Toye Shogbamimu:

The lip-sync needs a little more work.

Joshua:

I feel like I'm missing a lot when watching this. Lip sync could use some work.

Josh:

not bad, maybe more smoother transitions between words would of helped, it seems like the mouth shapes are held too long like little pauses.