Sourjya Mitra:

visual representation of me talking to the wall every day

Josh:

first, she looks cross eyed, second when she speaks it looks like shes getting shot with a nerf gun to the face, and lastly I don't know how this was approved for entry because you cant cut off a major part of the audio and just not do the rest, you need to do the full thing, if you dont have time or an out, then just dont post it as finished. But keep trying and you will improve