Comments:
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Bailey Bourdon:
I think it would be better if we had close ups to see the lip sync better
Tsacha Hyneman:
Could use more than a static shot, or even with one shot a more interesting angle.
eddyiv:
The movements feel lkinda slow at times when they dont need to be.
Éloise Valiquette:
Pay more attention to the lower body of your characters. The girl slips off her feet a bit at the start and the man walks a bit strangely at the end!
Zachary Lussier:
I think you can play with the legs to make an overall better animation.
Simon Côté:
good fluidity and tempo
Anthony Abou Rezk:
Good job! I like the setting, but try different camera angles next time, to make the story more interesting, the animation is good, but some places needed to be reworked
Animator: James
Description: My animation submission for this month
Experience: Beginner - first semester in maya
Time taken: Hm....8 hours or so?