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11 second club - agent

by James

Final Rating: 3.89. Finished 140 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: James

Description: My animation submission for this month

Experience: Beginner - first semester in maya

Time taken: Hm....8 hours or so?

Comments:

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Bailey Bourdon:

I think it would be better if we had close ups to see the lip sync better

Tsacha Hyneman:

Could use more than a static shot, or even with one shot a more interesting angle.

eddyiv:

The movements feel lkinda slow at times when they dont need to be.

Éloise Valiquette:

Pay more attention to the lower body of your characters. The girl slips off her feet a bit at the start and the man walks a bit strangely at the end!

Zachary Lussier:

I think you can play with the legs to make an overall better animation.

Simon Côté:

good fluidity and tempo

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Good job! I like the setting, but try different camera angles next time, to make the story more interesting, the animation is good, but some places needed to be reworked