Zachary Lussier:

Camera move too much, the mouvement is to improve and the facials too. So a lot of things to improve to be better in animation.

Éloise Valiquette:

I think you could improve your animation by working more on the poses of your female character. I have a feeling her weight doesn't shift with her when she moves.

eddyiv:

the guys legs are rather strange, i don't think they should be that bent for that long, seems kinda exhausting

Simon Côté:

the camera angle are moving to quickly in my opinion, great attempt ;)

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Good! The facial expressions are lacking a little and the lip-sync could be clearer, but it still does the job.