James Van Dam:

Was this suppose to feel like a 90's computer game?.....

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Mike M.:

This animator needs to learn the fundamentals of animation.

Aaron Clement:

Like the ending. Didn't quite get this one, though. Nice staging.

Jez:

Ha ha .... I think these women know it .... you lazy .....
a good story

Liviu Boar:

No lip sync...

Jim P:

haha, He's talking to us.. right? good angle.

Richard Clark:

Would love to see more movement in the guy's body. He shouldn't have to blink at every dialogue change. Would also like to see more frames defining the girls motion as well.

Amartya Mukherji:

ha ha ha .. funny :D