Amol Wagh:

Need to add a breathing kind of animation in torso for the both characters. The staging choice is bit confusing. You could have cut this into 2-3 shots to make it more dramatic. Facial expressions needs a practice.

Enrico Westley:

You definitely have a rig that can be pushed to that nth level, so I would say go back and learn how to breakdown your dialog. That way you will know your beats and able to move between those poses.

Aaron McGriff:

Be sure to check your compression. The artifacts are pretty distracting on this.