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Pretty decent photo

by wood

Final Rating: 5.04. Finished 52 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: wood

Description: Two people looking at pictures and talking

Experience: beginner

Time taken: 1 months

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

frames 150-200 be careful of "popping" in the guy's elbow as your IK pops in and out of range. Less glossy textures on the viewport textures would also help the characters read a bit better.

You have some nice body mechanics, though I think you went a little overboard on the rabbit's ears. Sometimes less is more (the poses and everything are nice, but maybe just let them hold in position). I think the other thing that stands out is the lipsync/mouth shapes could use some work. Maybe it's just the size of the video/hard to see, but it feels like it's mostly flapping jaws.
also seems like maybe a little too much camera movement

Predrag Lazic:

Cinematography is um, as if they're on a boat.

DongHun Kim:

exellent