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The circular dimension.
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eyes are very staring
Blink! Please blink! Why doesn't he blink? ;_;
He didn't appear to have any life in him. In terms of how it was blocked out at least, it's still very stiff. Loosen up a bit, and act out the scene to see how you would animate the character.
Keep at it.
his eyes are stuck :)
moving too slow
Nice job. I would probably work more on his eyes and lip sync animations. The eyes are always looking at the same place, not sure where and looks a little creepy.
Perhaps more interesting facial expressions and body language would help?
Animator: Esteban Mendez
Description: My first entrie here. I'm not proud but I want you know about your opinions.
I have to improve the timming and lipsyinc, and a lot of more stuff.
Experience: Less than a year, but some exercisies some time ago.
Time taken: My free time along the whole month