Final Rating: 5.70. Finished 32 out of 231 entries.

755 views including the voting period.


Animator: mark davies

Description: Short animation created in Adobe Flash
No time to neaten/ ink and colour before end of competition (curse you work commitments!!!)but hope you enjoy anyways :)

Experience: 10 years

Time taken: 13 hours


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Joe Jinks:

Great character designs and I love the rabbit character. Nice acting as well with nice arcs and a really smooth animation.

James Hornby:

looks good but i noticed on the bear you could do with easing into your poses a little more softly in some cases.

Adrian Winchell:

Really shouldn't have such a big motion on the bear during the initial line - it pulls attention away from the rabbit and makes it harder to notice it's talking at first. props for 2D tho!

Suyog Patil:

Nice .

Glenn Lazo:

There's a lack of spacing in the bear, he always moves the same amount of frames in every movement. It lacks intention.