Comments:
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Zoe Piel:
Odd camera choices.
Manuel Jiménez:
Review staging ;)
Johann Wong:
Tighten up the animations. They look really floaty.
Andrew DiLullo:
Due to the constant movement on both characters and the awkward staging, there's currently no way to tell where I'm supposed to focus.
A F:
Getting a nice '50s film-noir vibe from this. The lip-syncing and action (especially on the "they tell me" part) should match more, at the moment it looks a bit disjointed. Great work, though!
Kristyna K. Hrdlickova:
OMG!! So Nice, I love the acting, how he realized that she is gonna say something that will hurt him a lot and already feels hurt.
Animator: Lisa Cooper
Description: A man and his now ex-wife struggle with the reality that they are no longer together.
Experience: Third year animation student, no prior experience before University
Time taken: 2-3 days