Howard Cameron:

I don't know why but her body feels strange when she says "Date". Amazing work overall!

Would it be able to suggest that when she says "Date", the crow flies off and knocks him down.

William Barry Eggington:

I really love this one! Great idea and expertly executed.

Amartya Mukherji:

This according to me is one of the best 3D animation entry this month. Very nice use of the audio,- Every sfx detail has been kept in mind while animating. Thumbs up..!!

Ben:

great storytelling, well done sir!

Shadrak Guichard-Foster:

Enjoyed it! It was one of the few that addressed his breathing within the clip! Great context too. Something that felt out of place however was the snappiness of the mother when she says "date". It felt a bit too strong for the tone of her voice. That type of movement would possibly be better if she was shouting, rather than sternly stating something, Overall fantastic though!