Comments:
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Yonghwan Seok:
I do not get the point.
Ryan Woods:
more contrast for background! scenery is large part of story for this piece, and i could not see it. for closeup shots facial expression is vital, recommend more change/progression during this time. body mechanics at the end look much better, well done.
Adrian Petitjean:
Floaty animation. Did not understand what is happening until the last shot (even by watching it a second time).
Start by going back to the fundementals. Maybe gather some reference to compare it with your animation
Victor Lemée:
Story is not clear, lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off
Animator: Jomon CJ
Description: this animation was done in few hours.i'm a student and this is my first time in 11 second club.so,i saw the audio and made a animation which doesn't meet my expectations. i'll be working well next time and i'm sure that it'll meet my expectation.
Experience: student, 0 experience.
Time taken: few hours