Heidi:

Could use a little more lighting

Shaun Bartoo:

This is a tough one. One character is too dark to really make out, and the other is a robot with super limited expressive capability. There isn't much of a sense of acting here unfortunately. The choice of characters makes this a big challenge. If I was challenging myself to make these character work, I'd choose big strong silhouettes for each phrase, with snappy inbetweens to really emphasize key words, but there just isn't a lot here to review or give feedback on. Sorry.

Olivia English:

Funny, but I feel they don't emote enough to convey the message of the clip.