Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
I strongly suggest you to add some moving hold and try to make more dynamic poses. It would really improve your work here.
Nathan Greensmith:
Good animation, nice characters, nice work.
Kyle Novak:
Not very believable in the movement, and you need to ground your characters otherwise it just looks like a doodle.
Moby:
Great start. Shot probably needs a little more animation. Simple and clean now, probably a little too much.
Animator: Niels Beekes
Description: Since it was a simple voice clip I decided to join in the fun once more (it's been a long time!).
Didn't bother with the victim. :)
No time to clean or color though. But it was fun to do! Hopefully next time I'd have a lot more time to put into it.
Experience: Around 12 years
Time taken: 2 ~ 3 hours