Comments:
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Robert Zhou:
I like the life you gave the character on the right, but it became too repetitive. I'd like to see some more pose variety. The lip sync was good though!
Ben Halstead:
Sometimes less is more, but this is too little. There's very little acting here beyond standing and breathing. Also, be careful with looped breathing cycles... nobody inhales while they're speaking. But what you have so far is good!
Jasmine Moody:
Bad staging :(
Bruno de Coninck:
Your characters are too rigid. Particulary the one on the left. When you extands your arms, you should have some weight shift! Except that, it is a good start. Keep up the good work!
Nathan Greensmith:
Nice try. The first characters lip sync is a little lost due to the distance from the camera. Character two's lip sync and performance is lost because he has his back to the camera, But good effort.
Samidha Kumar:
work on staging ur act and posing your characters. Keep practicing.. :)
Animator: Zacary Hutchinson
Description: Playblast using viewport 2.0
Experience: 8 moths
Time taken: 2 weeks