Final Rating: 3.74. Finished 77 out of 104 entries.

409 views including the voting period.


Animator: Zachary Checkeye

Description: Really tried to push myself with this one, I got inspired by the June winner and wanted to give it another try!

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Brian W.:

Nice story. Good poses. Not bad for a rough WIP.

Kirsten Schow:

Good style, but I wish it had been polished up more to see the movements clearer.

Namok Eu:

I can see the potential of the characters, but I wish you cleaned up the animation! It's difficult to understand what's going on.


I like the shot setup and story idea here a lot, I also like how the chatacter on the left would have to "talk with their eyes", would love to see a more polished version!