Comments:
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Brian W.:
Nice story. Good poses. Not bad for a rough WIP.
Kirsten Schow:
Good style, but I wish it had been polished up more to see the movements clearer.
Namok Eu:
I can see the potential of the characters, but I wish you cleaned up the animation! It's difficult to understand what's going on.
:
I like the shot setup and story idea here a lot, I also like how the chatacter on the left would have to "talk with their eyes", would love to see a more polished version!
Animator: Zachary Checkeye
Description: Really tried to push myself with this one, I got inspired by the June winner and wanted to give it another try!
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 2 weeks