K.Rice:

Nice attempt...not sure what is going on...too many camera moves...Keep animating.

Alex Rodarte:

The subtle lipsync could use some work; What helps me is to map out where each emphasized syllable is and make sure the body emphasizes that along with the mouth <3 Otherwise the audio sounds a bit detached from the animation (ex here would be at the "or or")

Subhra Sankar Das:

Take care of facial expressions & lip sync parts

Frank Bear:

Some good points in this effort. Keep animating!