Karl Bernhardt:

I like the movements, especially the end pose. The acting's nice and so is the animation (a little stop-starty but I even get that sometimes) when she says "what kind of mother do you think I am" i feel like you could have put more expression into it.

John Michael Wilyat:

Very swimmy. Try creating a workflow that helps you keep your poses snappy and clear. Right now it looks like when you changed the curves to splines it just became soup. Nice staging!

Marcella D.:

So-so

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.