Michael D. Smith:

Blink!

Danny Kneip:

He really doesn't appear to be looking at her once leaning forward around 223. The lip sync and movement need quite a bit of polishing, but it's a good attempt nonetheless.

Mattie Walsh:

Reference this to get those shoulders happening.

Jesse J. Jones:

Body stays still while arm moves on its own, making it feel very unnatural like you're just dragging IK handles around. Try animating the basics like a walk first to get an idea of how our bodies motivate our arm and leg movements.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Don't hide the man behind the lamp. The lady is distracting.