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Animator: Donovan Luch

Description: a lightsabre battle

Experience: my 1st class this quarter

Time taken: several days

Comments:

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Nathan Greensmith:

Lacks fundamentals but is fun.

Hanne Dewachter:

Your characters are very stiff.. If you want to go for a full blown action scene (which, honestly, doesn't really fit this soundbite) you're going to have to have your characters' whole body move. Don't limit movement to the limbs. But keep practicing.

Davit Martirosyan:

WTF?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Kerry Kirkpatrick:

It's missing a sense of weight to your characters movements.