Alex Reyes:

I really like this story concept and the character, your lighting and rendering is pretty good too. The only thing that is a bit distracting for me at the moment is the lip sync. I'd have no way of knowing whether reference footage was used or not, but I think that having reference footage for both the body actions and mouth actions would help improve this piece a lot. Some more satisfying and snappy mouth movements would really help. Either way, great job :^)

Kyra Simone:

Good and clear expression. The anim gets stuttery and i get what kind of energy theres trying to be here, but more follow through can help it be more natural. Look at Hotel Transylvania for energetic animation that still looks smooth.

Cristian:

The staging of the shot puts you in a very good position where you only have to animate the top half of this character, while also establishing the focus of the shot very directly. This animation does need work, particularly with the lip-sync and body movements..

The exaggeration could be toned down.